Teen Poetry #7 |
DAD !!!! I need u .... |
intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
I could sob to get all i wanted, I could say and be excused, I could cling on to you when too scared, That was the time when u believed... I WAS A CHILD.... Now, when u say i've grown, And i have to live on my own, But today i need u the most, Coz in the middle of this world, I find myself alone, If growing out of ur love is what growing meant..... I WISH I HAD NEVER GROWN UP..... TO FACE THE PAINFUL FACT.... DAD!! could u possibly see that the child in me is still alive ...? DAD!! could u possibly see that i need u when ever i strive....? "DAD!! COULD U POSSIBLY LOVE ME WITHOUT EXPECTING ME TO BE PERFECT EVERYTIME....?" DAD!! could u possibly give it a try... Love me for who i m |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Wow. fantastic first post. not crazy about the capslocks, but i understand why you did. This is simply great, with a touch of peter pan syndrome... amazing, keep posting! <3kerR When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome to Pip! A touching first post, you really should give this to your dad. *please check your email for a special greeting! |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
hey thnx for all ur appreciation.. thnx again Love me for who i m |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
Love me for who i m |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no, no script....the compliment is genuine, and the note to check your email, is so you know to check it and to expect something to be there...not just think it's spam. |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
SEA thank you for that greeting thts really very special to me Love me for who i m |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shilpi~ A hearty WELCOME TO PiP !! It is a delight to have you join our poetic circle~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
thank you so much i really like it Love me for who i m |
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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
it sounds like something i would write...to my dad |
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