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0 posted 2005-11-13 03:16 PM



I  could  sob  to  get  all  i  wanted,
I  could  say  and  be  excused,
I  could  cling  on  to  you  when  too  scared,
That  was  the  time  when  u  believed...
I  WAS  A  CHILD....

Now, when  u  say  i've  grown,
And  i  have  to  live  on  my  own,
But  today   i  need  u  the  most,
Coz  in  the  middle  of  this  world,
I  find  myself  alone,
If  growing  out  of  ur  love  is  what
growing  meant.....
I  WISH  I  HAD  NEVER  GROWN  UP.....
TO  FACE  THE  PAINFUL  FACT....

DAD!!  could  u  possibly  see  that  the  child
in  me  is  still  alive ...?

DAD!!  could  u  possibly  see  that  i  need  u
when  ever  i  strive....?

"DAD!!  COULD  U  POSSIBLY  LOVE  ME  WITHOUT
EXPECTING  ME  TO   BE  PERFECT  EVERYTIME....?"

DAD!!  could  u  possibly  give  it  a  try...


Love me for who i m

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1 posted 2005-11-13 03:23 PM


Wow. fantastic first post. not crazy about the capslocks, but i understand why you did. This is simply great, with a touch of peter pan syndrome...

amazing, keep posting!
<3kerR

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2 posted 2005-11-13 03:24 PM


Welcome to Pip! A touching first post, you really should give this to your dad.

*please check your email for a special greeting!

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3 posted 2005-11-13 03:53 PM


hey thnx for all ur appreciation..
thnx again

Love me for who i m

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5 posted 2005-11-13 04:05 PM


Love me for who i m

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6 posted 2005-11-14 12:06 PM


no, no script....the compliment is genuine, and the note to check your email, is so you know to check it and to expect something to be there...not just think it's spam.
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7 posted 2005-11-14 07:01 AM


SEA
thank you for that greeting
thts really very special to me

Love me for who i m

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8 posted 2005-11-14 09:00 AM


Shilpi~



A hearty WELCOME TO PiP !!
It is a delight to have you join our poetic circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

intention
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9 posted 2005-11-14 11:14 AM


thank you so much
i really like it

Love me for who i m

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10 posted 2005-11-25 03:48 PM


it sounds like something i would write...to my dad
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