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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
You walked out of my life I had thought it was the end one year in time to just fade away not one word did I hear from you and not one letter did you write the past eight months were empty with out your light but now you've come back just showed up on my doorstep today saying how much you missed me and how you wanted to stay wanted to make up for the lost time and for the painful memories you left behind I missed you so much much more than I had actually wanted to say I want you to stay but my heart cannot handle you back in my life it hurts me to adimit this but we were just not meant to ever be again. "See my wrists; |
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I_heart_rock Junior Member
since 2005-11-26
Posts 10 |
wow ....tht was a really good poem..it seemed like u put a lot of emotion into it like this poem ment a lot to u  -jess |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
This poem does mean alot to me. If want to, take a look in to feelings forum at When people come back. It goes hand in hand with this poem. Thanks "Hold on..if you feel like letting go, |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was a good display of emotion. i've read alot like it, but it wasn't bad. good luck. keep writing. -alex |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
for sure awesome sad end though i know what those feel like too love is a very powerful emotion ~wolfman |
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