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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-01-09 04:24 PM

prayers that delay an answer

unbridle scarlet from the wooden post
that holds up the surreal stable scene;
she never needed a place to be tied down at.

the quiet sounds around this town
are the only conversations she knows,
and she holds them in her plumb patterned palm.

wasted excuses and unloaded baggage
keep scarlet safely seduced in man-made prisons;
she never needed a place to be confined in.

with her tear ducts four-leaf luck
she may be able to drown in her insecurity,
but what wisdom did wisemen wishe her?

ignored by those who chose to be forgotten,
she guids her hands grasping a gun;
she never needed an end to let her go.

now she has peace on an eternal lease,
paying the balance with more than her savings,
could heaven ever heal this hopeless one?

a cross on a hill covered her price
settiing her free to fulfill the forthcoming;
she just needed a saviour to be saved.

for once scarlet got what she prayed for...just later than she could use it.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

1 posted 2004-01-09 06:55 PM

i think i followed this one, but ugh, it was a little hard to follow at times. with the words and what not. but i did like the parts i understood, which was the first half i guess. anyways. good job. dont forget your readers may not know where your going with the words you portray. good work.

mysilentsaviour
New Member

since 2005-11-20

Posts 2
California

2 posted 2005-11-21 01:09 AM

Wow, im new to this.. but i have read a lot of your stuff... you have an amasing way with words... please email me id LOVE to talk to you [email protected]

~Near or far you are my light, my silent saviour~

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

3 posted 2005-11-21 06:52 PM

she may be able to drown in her insecurity,
but what wisdom did wisemen wishe her?

ignored by those who chose to be forgotten,
she guids her hands grasping a gun;
she never needed an end to let her go.

You never cease to amaze me. I love every second reading your poetry. Well-done.

<3ker

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2005-11-23 07:12 PM

i absolutely love this one thanks for sharing your writings are astonishing.

Laura

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2005-12-01 02:35 PM

thanks all. i'm surprised to see someone dig this one up.

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