Please let tommorow be better.

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Teen Poetry #7

Please let tommorow be better.

BeckzBoo
Junior Member

since 2005-07-14

Posts 10

0 posted 2005-09-14 10:30 PM

Just when I think the worst has come,
My world keeps falling down on me.
One by one the things start pilling up,
It's getting harder and harder to handle them.
There just coming all at once,
I dont want it being 3 against 1.
I just can't take that right now,
I hope that you can see,
Im reallly just trying to do what I think is right,
Hoping that history will not repeat itself.
I just hope that this whole thing will pass,
It's just been the longest day of my life,
I just keep hoping and wishing,
That tommorow will be better,
Please let tommorow be better.

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

1 posted 2005-09-14 11:00 PM

I liked this alot, but one note...it's spelled tomorrow, not tommorrow

other than that, well written, and thanks for sharing<3

<3kerR

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

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