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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248
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every time I see you you're all i can think about. You hold my hand, kiss my cheek Act like Im the only one. But I know better. I walk away, and you eye my best friend. I turn my back, and you grab hers. There's something wrong with that. You whisper in my ear, tell me everything I wish was true. Two minutes later, you replay those phrases to three other girls. I don't know why but I'm drawn to you. And you know it. And you use it. And I can do nothing but stay up at night and think of you. You know? I thought you were smart...But you cant see what is directly in front of your face... [This message has been edited by CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa (09-14-2005 03:27 PM).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem. You captured the pain very well. I'm just going to say that you're young and have plenty of challenges ahead of you....... some of them pertaining to boys like this. there's a lot of great guys out there, keep on looking. Cuz it looks like this one has a wandering eye  javier~ |
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