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0 posted 2005-09-04 07:09 PM



Kiss of the stars,
Sprinkle my heart,
Capture my essence,
With each breath-
It departs,

Unfurl me,
Yet again,
And take me within,
As your deepest desire,

Breathe into me your soul,
And your fears,
And I will let you run
Farther in life- then
You have ever been,

Carry me with you,
Each second at a time,
And be ready for a life,
Filled with many whispers,

Kisses, and hugs,
Romantic walks and
Playful baths,

Love me again,
Like you want to,
Make me your need,
Once more.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
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bostonia
1 posted 2005-09-16 12:22 PM


wow i am so surprised no one has replied to this yet. i loved it. im guessing this poem was about a girl, and if i was her, i would just melt. anyway, thanks for sharing.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."   -death cab

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2005-09-30 12:13 PM


your work is always so emotional... nice work and i too would melt if it were given to me... im amazed no one else has replied either....
keep the writing coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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