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Teen Poetry #7
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Christioned
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark
0 posted 2005-09-20 12:19 PM


These are my letters
to a world that never seems
to want to write back to me.

I try in vain to make them see
I just wanted a taste of ommortality
but the world just never seems to care.

However with these letters do take heart
for in them is part of me
and what I'd longed to be.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed
© Copyright 2005 Andi Rex - All Rights Reserved
tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
1 posted 2005-09-20 09:33 PM

i like this i dont think i have read anything of yours before... looking to reading more

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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2005-09-29 08:50 PM

I liked this. Thought it was nice.

However, I think you mean "immortality"

keep posting
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