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Teen Poetry #7

this pain is love

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2005-09-27 03:03 AM

i wrote this really quickly and i know it needs a lot of work, i dont even know if it makes sense...but i guess love never really makes sense.

being apart
is breaking my heart
although you were the one
who broke it from the start
still everyday
while im away
i'll continue to love you
i'll never stray
i wish you knew
that id always be true
but my words go unspoken
and i'll never tell you
the way i feel
its more than real
your heart is all
i want to steal
i look in your eyes
and its no suprise
you make me melt
you give me butterflies
i wish you could see
that my love is free
this pain is love
and its killing me
and maybe one day
when im back to stay
i'll tell you these feelings
i'll find a way
if only i could send
this to you my friend
and have you love me
until the end
but i know
if i do you'll go
it'd ruin our friendship
and i'd be alone

{in a million years i wont be over you}

[This message has been edited by LOSTinTHISworld (09-27-2005 12:17 PM).]

red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

1 posted 2005-10-01 07:03 AM

this is really a nice writing ......i know how u feel cuz i jes had an experence like that this week mhope ur okay !

-[[christie]]

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