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Teen Poetry #7

layers of chaos.

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2005-09-02 10:40 PM

dawn,
  the light shining through his silken fingertips.
spin me away from these
                     streetlights,
   towns and towns full of bent lovers
and pent up friendships.
              trapped underneath stitches upon
stitches of distortion,
don't ever believe the reflections
                      dancing upon your mirror.
and can you feel the sun when he
   screams that you're his number one?
can you feel the sun when your
                        smile is tight and your eyes
     are searching for god?
a holy symbol,
full of
                              (rays) of nothing
                       and (sparks) of summer ending.
and this is how we get by,
this is how we get high - up near the
          stars, riding upon forsaken lies.
weighed down by hands
                             of boys who don't
know better.
who don't know the (first letter)
                             of your name.
holding us together,
but drowning us in sin.
     always too late to start over,
     always too late to begin again.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-09-03 10:23 PM

this almost brought tears to my eyes.
its so real.
so true.
the perfect definition of summer.

AtLsHawTy17
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

2 posted 2005-10-21 03:34 PM

OMG i loved it that touched my heart and it almost brought tears to my eyes too good job

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

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