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A.L
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0 posted 2005-09-29 04:21 PM



9-29-2005

Seems like yesterday I could have let it all go,
Today is only a reminder of how things will never be,
I'll dream of happiness...
And tomorrow I'll wake to nothing new

Bitter is my heart,
These empty eyes now see right past this hollow shell
of someone I once knew,
Someone who used to let me love,
Who never let me hurt for too long,
Who never left my side

Your side of the bed is cold,
But your still there,
And the pain won't go away,
I've forgotten what it feels like to be loved
Each day brings separation

I wish I was as invisible as you make me feel,
Then maybe I wouldn't feel a thing at all,
And I wouldn't notice the way you ignore me,
And you couldn't see my tears,

If only I could numb my heart,
So I couldn't feel it break,
I'd have courage to do whats best for you and I
Because I Love You is not enough...

I see me frowning in your eyes...
I see the fear in you...
Where no one ever should be...

::From Autumn To Ashes::

© Copyright 2005 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2005-09-29 06:50 PM


I wish you the best.  Love will come again, trust me!  
Cloud 9
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2 posted 2005-09-29 07:26 PM


EXACTLY!! It is so unfortunate when "love isn't enough" anymore.

((big hugs))

aussie teen
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3 posted 2005-09-30 12:28 PM


those three little words arent enough when there is nothing meant behind them... i know how you feel, love will come again and you will know from the begining if it will last....
nice work in writing about something so hard..
keep believing in yourself and there is no limit to what you can do..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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4 posted 2005-10-22 06:44 PM


If only I could numb my heart,
So I couldn't feel it break,


i know just how you feel there
be strong and move on
peace and hugs
~ wolfy

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