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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-08-21 12:21 PM

All those kisses you gave me,
I did not know at that time,
And without them,
My heart would not glow,

I took us for granted,
Many times I got angry,
And hastily departed,
That’s how I dealt it,

Then I finally knew,
That this love of yours is real,
And that I have to stop myself,
From hurting you like this,

But the last time was the end,
You let me leave you-
And I broke your heart,
One final time,

You warned me of this moment,
But I can’t bear to know that I chose,
To test you one more time,
I guess I chose my own demise,

At night, I look at the sky,
Hoping you are looking at the same star,
Maybe your wish did not come true,
Knowing that we are only miles apart,

So I write about the lost love,
That once was amply there,
Few months of pleasure,
Now filled with life time of pain.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-08-21 07:06 PM

Ronil~
Wonderful penning ... sometimes the loss of love hurts so badly that we feel we can't go on without it ... but, that too, soon passes~
Honest Injun~

*Huglets* to you, dear poet~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2005-08-22 08:46 AM

there is always room in anyones heart for another chance... but only if it is earned... at least you know what it is that you have lost and realise how good it could have been... alll i can say is let her know you will always be there for her as a friend for when she needs you... let her regain her trust in you by needing you...
as for the poem as always beautiful write full of emotion... keep on writing ronil you have so much talent...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2005-08-25 05:23 PM

hey,

overall i don't know if i liked the format of the poem, but the feeling was genuine and really easy to relate to so that make me enjoy it a lot more. i know how you feel...kinda strange to test something so much only to realize that it was the only real thing in your life to begin with...thanks for sharing.

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

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