Teen Poetry #7 |
Even after a lifetime... |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Many nights I lay awake, Thinking thoughts, Gathering them one at a time, Knowing that after all the years My life will come to a pass, The last moments of my life Will have memories of you, And an empty scotch glass. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
i like this one, good job. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
the ending was a punch, at first i was like okay another semi generic poem you know but then the last line came out and i was just like damn... hopefully that makes sense bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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