Teen Poetry #7 |
The Truth In My Eyes |
doyouseemeforme Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 18 |
I've grown up so much more than you'll ever know, what can I say to prove it what can I do to show. I have to live with my mistakes my two biggest regrets, if I could turn back time I'd erase the sunsets. I know you don't believe me you think I'm filling you with lies, but you know how people say you can tell the truth in someone's eyes. So look deep in mine and follow the path, it doesn't take a genius its not science or math. Just stare into my eyes and tell me what you see, just open up your heart and have a little faith in me. I promise this time I'll deserve it I'll hold it very near, cause losing it again is my one true fear Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your rhyming is well thought out in this one, and the message was a strong and good one, great advise! Look in the eyes! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a fine write! and everyone deserves another chance |
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