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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2005-07-05 11:51 AM



She touches me
and all my pain disappears
Her smile renews me
and washes away my fears

I want to touch her soul
to taste a bit of her magic
to hold her heart in mine
and make it something other than tragic

The blood in my veins
belongs to her
The sickness in my heart
has finally found a cure

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
        -"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

© Copyright 2005 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Match
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since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2005-07-17 02:44 PM


Nice. Good dark images about "her", I like it very much.

Im sorry i've failed you all.

*bleeding 4 eternity*
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since 2005-07-16
Posts 10
Alabama, U.S.
2 posted 2005-07-17 03:01 PM


good job. i liked it.
* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29
Posts 76
PA,USA
3 posted 2005-07-19 09:13 PM


nice poem...very deep

-Smile, it's not a sin.

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
4 posted 2005-08-11 06:05 AM


i like it, dark like ALL of your poetry lol.

btw i still want my hug.

berg

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
5 posted 2005-08-13 07:09 PM


nice write

" Breathe life, for you are not alone"
- Killswitch Engage

StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
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bostonia
6 posted 2005-08-16 01:55 PM


i love it. great write.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."   -death cab

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7 posted 2005-08-16 09:04 PM


Loved the last lines - great stuff!
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