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0 posted 2005-08-06 12:18 PM



Let me heal the pain,
That has you feeling dead,
Depleted of your strength
That you can’t see the light,

Don’t worry- for you’re found-
Love for life,
Hold you so tight,
You can’t help but smile,

Felt your warm cheeks,
As they caress my lips,
And my hands hug-
Your curvy hips,

Fingers locked tight,
Am I jailed up with-
With you?
Wouldn’t mind that one bit,

My pleasure is giving you
All that you want,
And need in this life,
And the next one,

Your will be always be close,
Each beat, and each thought,
Now devoted to you-
By yours truly,

Don’t worry about a thing,
For I came with the love,
That has you breathing again,
Laughing and not crying,

No need to make wishes,
It came true, with your
First kiss and then-
My soul breathed…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
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1 posted 2005-08-06 06:00 AM


awh.... soooo sweet... you have a way with words that makes people melt...
awesome write...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2005-08-06 09:54 PM


this is awesome, a really sweet poem. it still felt...i don't know, i hate the word edgy but i will use it.  a good piece.

bergundy

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