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0 posted 2005-07-23 02:40 PM



For the time I saw you,
So fine, so hot,
Devil thoughts in my mind,
I could see myself kissing-
Those lips,
And hips,

The first touch-
My heart sinks lower,
Lips touch closer,

My eyes close,
Smile fills my face,
Engulfed in your smell,

Pause-
Each second,
For an eternity,

Let this moment last,
For a while,
Holding your face,

What’s next?
Nothing-
But passion,

Thirst-
Quenched now,
Months I have waited,

We kiss-
Once again,
And it’s real,

U and I-
Together at last,
In lover land.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2005-07-23 05:13 PM


you sound happy It looks real good on you
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2 posted 2005-07-24 09:40 AM


This is a cute poem.  I liked this alot.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

* shining star*
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3 posted 2005-07-24 07:05 PM


awsome poem!

-Smile, it's not a sin.

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4 posted 2005-07-25 07:22 AM


this is so beautiful.... well written and i know these feleings all too well my self....
its good to see you happy..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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