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~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

0 posted 2005-07-21 04:28 AM

Theres so much stress going on in my life, its amazing that im still living, but something's keeping me alive!
I dont know whether i should stay or go, Im not sure what to do, my mind keeps telling me so!
Should i end it the way she did or should i work through it and actually be happy again?
I dont want to live this way anymore because of all that's happened, it has me crawling on the floor! Im so sick of being here but i dont know what else to do!
My mind is racing but yet i can only think of you! I love you more than words describe!
So honestly, your the one and only thing keeping me alive!

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

1 posted 2005-07-21 04:29 AM

I wrote that right after my best friend's mom commmited suicide! My boyfriend was trying to make me feel better and then finally i realized that he needed me! It's all apart of life's stresses...
*Holly*

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2005-07-22 03:18 AM

Stress can make us think a little crazy sometimes, but I am glad to hear you found your way through that maze. There isn't a day goes by I don't have a problem to solve, and eventually doing that makes you a better person. Nicely penned.

~* Carpe' Diem *~
Tis only in their dreams that men truly be free, 'twas always thus and always will be. ~ Keating

BabyGirl323
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 11

3 posted 2005-07-22 02:58 PM

this is,... soo romantic. lol.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-07-24 09:41 AM

Hmmm.. Sometimes it is all of how we look at things.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

5 posted 2005-07-24 02:04 PM

wow, i love this piece. and very loving.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

6 posted 2005-07-24 11:12 PM

Content wise, very sweet.

Structure wise, it could use some work. Don't go crazy with your punctuation!!!! Some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, and the meter was off.

But I like the message. It's a very heartfelt piece, and I'm glad that you shared it with us.

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