Teen Poetry #7 |
R.I.P. |
* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
You left me so young, helpless and with no one. I loved you so much, and in a split second you were gone like you were never here. We all miss you so, and we will never forget your sweet heart. When the world is quiet, I still hear you laugh. When it rains, I still feel your last hug. And when the world is sad, I still see your last tear. Somethings don't last forever, but my love for you will. I will love you forever and always. R.I.P. grandma, I still love you and miss you. -Smile, it's not a sin. [This message has been edited by * shining star* (07-18-2005 01:23 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh gosh.... the emotions from loosing my grandma and then my grandpa less than a year apart are still so raw...this just aches for me...*hugs* for you.. |
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BabyGirl323 Junior Member
since 2005-07-15
Posts 11 |
this is deep |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
wow i love the emotions brought out in this piece thanks for sharing |
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~*BayBee*~ Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 65In The Clouds... |
It hurts to lose someone that is close to you but time heals all wounds... Im sorry for your loss but keep writing... it will help! *Holly* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very emotional write...I know what it's like to lose someone. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Brings back memories. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
thanks for all the good posts! and i have moved on so i'm fine! -Smile, it's not a sin. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
touching |
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