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* shining star*
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0 posted 2005-07-17 03:25 PM


You left me so young,
helpless and with no one.
I loved you so much,
and in a split second
you were gone
like you were never here.
We all miss you so,
and we will never forget your sweet heart.
When the world is quiet,
I still hear you laugh.
When it rains,
I still feel your last hug.
And when the world is sad,
I still see your last tear.
Somethings don't last forever,
but my love for you will.
I will love you forever and always.

R.I.P. grandma, I still love you and miss you.




-Smile, it's not a sin.

[This message has been edited by * shining star* (07-18-2005 01:23 AM).]

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with you
1 posted 2005-07-18 01:18 AM


oh gosh....
the emotions from loosing my grandma and then my grandpa less than a year apart are still so raw...this just aches for me...*hugs* for you..

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2 posted 2005-07-18 11:03 PM


this is deep
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3 posted 2005-07-19 06:23 PM


wow i love the emotions brought out in this piece thanks for sharing
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4 posted 2005-07-22 03:16 AM


It hurts to lose someone that is close to you but time heals all wounds... Im sorry for your loss but keep writing... it will help!
*Holly*

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5 posted 2005-07-23 01:13 AM


Very emotional write...I know what it's like to lose someone.
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6 posted 2005-07-24 09:39 AM


Brings back memories.

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* shining star*
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7 posted 2005-07-24 02:16 PM


thanks for all the good posts! and i have moved on so i'm fine!

-Smile, it's not a sin.

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8 posted 2005-08-21 01:30 PM


touching
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