Teen Poetry #7 |
"Roses" revised and fixed |
spaz02 Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74USA |
"ROSES" Roses are red Violets are blue and this pretty face is all for you Cause what you don't know won't hurt you a bit and this pretty face isn't all that great 'Cause if you look inside The fakeness in my eyes you'll see this pretty face isn't always that way so look real deep deep down in my soul and you'll see all the lies That I have to hide I will always hide Behind this magic mask and on lucky days you'll see the truth If only you knew My secrets and lies you might understand the pain I hide Maybe, just maybe one of these days I'll spill my guts and tell it all Roses are red Violets are blue and this pretty face Isn't pretty at all. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
love will make you beautiful |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there is an edit button you know...that is better than reposting or "double posting" the same poem again with such slight revisions as to not be able to tell what you changed....please do try to keep in mind, that double posting is against the guidelines... thanks! |
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