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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-05-14 01:12 PM

Caught a ride on the Greyhound.
Played guitar in the rain.
Thought of you
all
night
long.

I new it was over.
I was never
number one.

love will make you beautiful

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

1 posted 2005-05-19 12:26 PM

short and sweet and shows emotion

i like the description in the beginning a lot

nice write

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2005-05-20 12:43 PM

wow this was kind of sad... it was really good though

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

3 posted 2005-05-25 06:31 PM

I love short poetry mostly because I think
it takes a lot of talent to say what you
feel in a short amount of words. You pulled
it off beautifully though.

-Kelly

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

4 posted 2005-06-26 09:49 PM

so simple yet so complete... i know just the feeling and you made it real with only a few words- great job!

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

5 posted 2005-06-28 04:59 PM

raw...full of emotion...i loved the way you said everything you wanted to say in such a short, to the point manner. i loved it, looking forward to more great reads from you!!!
shara

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

6 posted 2005-06-28 11:46 PM

thanks for all the positive comments i really wasnt so sure bout this one

love will make you beautiful

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

7 posted 2005-06-29 11:34 PM

I really liked this poem. It reminds me of my last.

-Bobbi

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

8 posted 2005-06-29 11:48 PM

i like this alot...thats how i feel with my b/f as of now were together...but i feel like were getting distant...and he picks other things over me

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

9 posted 2005-06-30 01:20 AM

gosh... so sorry all of you have experienced or are experiencing this... sadly enough im still trying to be his #1.

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