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Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-06-27 06:15 PM



It was one night, they met by chance,
he seemed perfect; her but a dream.
when they were together that night
no one else existed.
As it drew to a close he wispered in her ear, "Come walk with me to my van."
He held her close, she was completly his.
"Do you want to go some where more private?"
She was so innocent,
but that was stolen from her in an instant.
He took all she had by force,
then left her with an empty shell.
The beautiful person that used to exist is now nothing more than a hollow, empty soul.

"See my wrists;
I feel your pain."-Creed

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1 posted 2005-06-27 07:53 PM


how terribly awful and deeply sad....it happens much too often...very effective write...
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