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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US 
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Tornado I woke up this morning With my eyes swollen shut My pillow still damp, And hair stuck to my face Mascara stains the sheets And tissues cover the floor Photos are ripped in half And strewn across the room The mirror is cracked And cds broken to pieces My chair flipped upside down The curtains pulled from the rod Clothes are thrown everywhere Pictures missing from their frames There’s a dent in the wall A plate shattered beneath it The fan’s running on high Making sounds as it spins Though its still stifling hot And my world is mute The knuckles of my right hand Are swollen and cut I feel no pain Nor remember what its from The one thing I remember Of last nights events Are that you said goodbye And my room paid the price --------- Yes.. personal experience. But things go on, life prospers, & feelings mend. Kind of ends suddenly, but I thought that was kind of the whole point. Imagery.. yeah, I'm kind of critiquing (spelling??) my own work, but anyways... I thought the imagery was reallly good. Maybe its just cuz I was actually looking at it. I dont really know, but tell me what you thought! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, and a lotta that comes from bad judgment. |
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SwT DeViL Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26London |
hey i really like this... im soz abt how things might've went.... but its most probably coz of the best... take care ***...$wT DeViL...*** |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
thanks for the reply... all that ranting & raving last night, we talked about it today.. and things are back to normal. heh.. ruining my room was worthless Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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