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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
and there is never anybody new. We built a fort out of sheets and blankets. I ran to make us tea. I brought it back and sat with you and wondered when you would kiss me. you never did. you built yourself a sword out of cardboard and poked me incessantly. You have the eyes of a blue eyed baby. There is never anybody new. You use your hands to take my child. We finger paint and touch each other. I don't like these rainbows. were too spread out. your too far off. Here comes the damn rain, drowning all the lepercauns in salt and hate. we are them now. we are old. and I don't like it. I need honey in my tea it's growing bitter there are wrinkles around your smile. I can't bring myself to call you and hear your distance. You collect my tears in a cup and go sit in the corner where you paint beautiful water color images... straight from my misery. you are the artist I am the ugly one. but there is never anybody new... I moved suddenly and the fort collasped with a quick burst of profanity you just glared at me and climbed into the plane in the picture I attempted to cause a storm but in my rage turned the whole thing blue. [This message has been edited by Lexy (06-12-2005 11:39 PM).] |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was alright. i don't know, the whole concept was just kinda, boring. sorry. i enjoyed the start, but then the middle slowed down and the end killed it for me. i don't even know what to suggest, sorry lexy. -alex |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
once again i completely disagree with him, sorry youngblood, anywho...yeah i loved it. your poems are such random images but some are beautiful. i love your poetry and i hope you never stop writing. thanks berg At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hey. no worries. I'm going through a rough time. I can't write worth crap and I'm aware of this. |
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