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Teen Poetry #7

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Savage Quiescence
Member

since 2002-07-29

Posts 326
Wandering

0 posted 2005-06-18 04:55 PM

Here's a little diddy I wrote just for the fun of it. It's nothing magnificent, but I found it entertaining.

A and B

If you please, point out to me
the one who taught you poetry.
For surely their mistake I see
and in short time you will agree.
For simply because two words rhyme
it does not mean they're worth a dime
'cuz you've got to make the time
for rhythm, rhyme and paradigm.
Create a structure and a flow
and from this beauty soon will grow.
Even the great Edgar A. Poe
had to start out nice and slow.
So don't expect a masterpiece
until your talent you increase
and when your patience does decease
wait 'till you can write in peace.

-Alicia

www.livejournal.com/users/alimakins

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2005-06-19 12:51 PM

this one made me smile.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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