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Teen Poetry #7

Walking alone now

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

0 posted 2005-05-25 05:32 PM

Walking alone now
It’s right
Things will be ok

I know you don’t agree….

I still cry at night
I still see that look of despair
In your

Once,

Happy eyes

I ache for you and your touch
But things must change

This
Is
One.

So next time i pass you by don’t
Forget
To smile

Please don’t hate me for this

I love you, for all it’s worth
And if i could change this

I hope you know i would

This is my final goodbye
It’s hard
But

I’ll
Miss
You
.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-05-25 09:13 PM

i really cant believe no one has commented to this yet i love it and it took the words out of my mouth i love it thanks for sharing im adding it to my library

love will make you beautiful

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2005-05-27 06:35 AM

this is beautiful... i know the feelings because im dealing with them right now. awesome and i cant believe you havent got more replies than this
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

3 posted 2005-05-27 11:25 PM

i really like this one

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2005-05-31 03:15 PM

This hit so close to home. I love the format as well. But wow, I love this poem so much. Especially these lines; "I love you, for all it's worth and if I could change this, I hope you know I would."
Powerful.
Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-05-31 07:52 PM

Hi Emma,

Very amazing write. There's so much emotion in it and I can really relate to it, especially this part:

"I still cry at night
I still see that look of despair
In your

Once,

Happy eyes"

Once again, great write! Keep it up!

~Alli~

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