Teen Poetry #7 |
Walking alone now |
I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
Walking alone now It’s right Things will be ok I know you don’t agree…. I still cry at night I still see that look of despair In your Once, Happy eyes I ache for you and your touch But things must change This Is One. So next time i pass you by don’t Forget To smile Please don’t hate me for this I love you, for all it’s worth And if i could change this I hope you know i would This is my final goodbye It’s hard But I’ll Miss You . |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
i really cant believe no one has commented to this yet i love it and it took the words out of my mouth i love it thanks for sharing im adding it to my library love will make you beautiful |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful... i know the feelings because im dealing with them right now. awesome and i cant believe you havent got more replies than this Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
i really like this one |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
This hit so close to home. I love the format as well. But wow, I love this poem so much. Especially these lines; "I love you, for all it's worth and if I could change this, I hope you know I would." Powerful. Thanks for sharing. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Hi Emma, Very amazing write. There's so much emotion in it and I can really relate to it, especially this part: "I still cry at night I still see that look of despair In your Once, Happy eyes" Once again, great write! Keep it up! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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