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HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

0 posted 2005-05-26 12:11 PM

What you want from me,
I just can't give.
The life you want to give me,
I just can't live.

I won't take you,
just to give you away.
If it's me you come to,
then with me you stay.

I'm the best player in the game,
but with me the stakes are high.
I'll not be another of the same.
Baby, with me it's do or die.

So if you're gonna play with me,
then you'd better ante up.
And when you are defeated by me,
be prepared to do more than give it up;

because yes, I'll take your body,
but I'll also take your soul,
and then I'll steal your heart.
Baby, I'll take you whole.

I'm the best there's ever been.
Just thought I'd let you know.
That I play to win.
When against me you go.

You still want to play?
Well that's fine,
but when we're done,
know you'll be mine.

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

1 posted 2005-05-26 01:10 AM

i wouldn't want to be her

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2005-05-27 06:33 AM

'my mind screams pick me pick me'

awesome write dude.... when she is beaten she wont know what has hit her..
well written
keep them coming
play hard and safe
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2005-05-31 03:30 PM

Awesome poem! I love the emotion behind it. This wasn't just good, this was cool. lol.
I like this new "don't walk all over me" attitude. Good for you!

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-05-31 07:49 PM

Hey Rich...

Well I haven't been around here lately and hadn't gotten the change to read your poetry until now, and I've got to say you've improved a lot since I last read you!
Good Job! Hope I'll be reading more of your poetry soon . . .

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

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