Teen Poetry #7 |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
this is a song i wrote, i just recored my first cd and its on that where did time go tomorrow used to seem so far away but now yesterdays gone and we start today in the very same way where did the light go it used to glow it used to shine me through my way but its become so dark and i cant see ive never been so afraid but things come and things go when will they come back i dont know but when times are tough and things seem down just remember it'll turn around where did the music go it used to play so loud is it me or did it fade i miss its melody the way it sang to me oh how i wish it would have stayed but things come and things go when will they come back i dont know but when times are tough and things seem down just remember it'll turn around i think i see the light its never shined so bright once again i'll find my way and whats that i hear its music in my ear oh how i missed how it played but things come and things go when will they come back i dont know but when times are tough and things seem down just remember it'll turn around {in a million years i wont be over you} |
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latteaddict213![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
Yeah. This does sound like a song. Your CD? What's it called? Maybe I've heard of it. It flows like a song. Well...ya Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey LOSTinTHISworld, Neat song, I’m having trouble coming up with the melody it should be sang too though? I mean what I have could be off from what you have… is there a site or some place I can listen to you sing this? I like it a lot, just wanting to know what kind of music your using, is it piano, guitar, base, drums, or just vocal? I’d love to know… I think piano would be neat... or at least I tried it with piano and I thought that was good but im a little biased in that opinion. lol Thanks for sharing this one with us, it’s nice to see songs mixed in with poems, but of course poems and songs are similar but sometimes it’s more interesting if you think of it in song qualities ![]() @-->--- |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
ummm.....you wont have heard it anywhere unless you live in ottawa. but its called becky...i will be famous one day so watch out for me! im working on putting it on a website...anyways thanx for the comments. take care. peace |
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