Teen Poetry #7 |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent ![]() |
If I was a painter, I would paint buttercups all over your face. If we were together I would be as happy as a flamingo's pink wings. If I was an island girl I would suf on the blue shoulders of the sea. I am the orange of a comet's tail, and the emerald of a mermaid's scales. I am turquoise like the fingerprints of the waves, and purple like the wings of the sunrise. You will never find a girl like me; I am like the pot of gold you always find at the end of a rainbow. -hold on to the one you love |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I didnt really understand this poem so I cant give you any advice...sorry |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
its just random... -hold on to the one you love |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
each line is pretty on it's own, but all together, they are very random...not that that is bad, it's just not as pulled together as it could be. ![]() |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
i liked it. yeah, slightly random, i agree there, but it made sense to me. I couldnt relate, but i kinda wish i could, as insane as that might make me sound... Keryn |
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