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electricxheart
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far away from home.

0 posted 2005-04-28 03:08 PM



the foggy wind chill and
second hand
smoke piled in around
me.
it was the spotlights,
it was her screams.
us;
two little foolish girls,
with the power
to attempt a friendship
that would
never fail.
but oh, it was time.
to sort
out the sorry lines and
never again
would i believer her
as she rode
in the car with me that
night.
filling up her lungs
capacity
with love song lyrics
and fresh air and
rubber.
tar and flowers and
headlights.
and it was time,
oh, it was time to stop
caring
and throw out the
friendship
rings and ropes tied
tightly
around each others
necks;
throw up from the fumes
and laugh
until we could never
be able
to find each other again,
until the word
faded was the only
word that
belonged in
our heads.

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1 posted 2005-04-30 12:39 PM


gosh this reminds me of a time, a long time ago for me...well done
fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2005-04-30 08:28 PM


yeah this reminded me of experiences past too. i think this is powerful, but it's not your strongest. still veryw ell done though. thanks

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
3 posted 2005-05-01 10:09 PM


somehow. I can really relate right now.
not directly as in the situation. just as a human.

dodge_chick2003
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since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
4 posted 2005-05-02 09:51 PM


I believe that in one way or another everyone can relat to this poem. Keep up the good work.
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

5 posted 2005-05-02 10:10 PM


wow.
all i can say. enjoyed.


_keryn

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