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Teen Poetry #7

Another Mindframe

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2005-04-29 03:26 PM

In another mind frame
where windmills and wind chimes
spin a perfect rhythm
with father time
ropes manage to hold the trees
combed by wind
decorated with dust and vines
old broken down walls
and cobblestone streets
where rainwater runs
'cross my bare feet
I laugh,
cause I think
"they could use a bath"

Dont know how I got here
or the point from which I came
so I absorb into still photos
and melt into a new mind frame

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-04-30 12:43 PM

"Dont know how I got here
or the point from which I came
so I absorb into still photos
and melt into a new mind frame"

enjoyed this

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

2 posted 2005-05-02 10:21 PM

i agree with SEA, most definitely, those lines spoke to me. Hope you figure out where you came from. Though if you dont, im sure we can count on more poetry that we'll relate to just as much, if not more.

fantastic.

_keryn

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