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Answer me that
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Answer me that |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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I really think theres a reason that I like him so much... Like something is telling me not to let him go... Everytime I follow my heart it leads me to him.. I mean, what other explanation is there? Why is it that he is all I can think about? Why is it that no matter how upset I am I see him and I cant help but smile? Why is it that when he smiles at me I get that feeling in my stomach? And even when he'd broken my heart... And hurt me as much as anyone could ever hurt me... When he lied to me and I hated him... Why then did I still feel those same feelings? Answer me that, and then I'll tell you why I let him hurt me so much. -hold on to the one you love |
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yankees01rugby Junior Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 48USA |
i love this poem! i matches almost perfectly to me and a guy...except he didnt lie...just didnt give an answer! "What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing." |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
ha thats lying i say... thanks~ lol -hold on to the one you love |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
Love the ending. Awesome write. -Kelly You play the song I know. |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
awesome. definitely some true feelings out there, and i love how you ended it. and i can definitely relate. awesome. _keryn |
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