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Teen Poetry #7

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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-04-29 04:31 AM

Opened real wide,
closed real tight.

Someday I'll find my way,
I'll free my soul.

Closed real wide,
Opened real tight.

I'll free my way,
I'll find my soul.

Broken hearts,
Lack of faith.

Someday I'll always be right,
Today I'll let you know.

Lack of heart,
Broken faith.

Today I'll always be right,
Someday I'll let you know.

-hold on to the one you love

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-04-30 12:07 PM

ok well by now i havent slept in past 24 hours... 24 was at 9 30 tonight... wow yeah... so i really dont know what this poem meant but it meant something so just take it as whatever you want... everything happens one way and then has been turning around a complete 180

-hold on to the one you love

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-04-30 12:22 PM

seriously. this is awesome. loved this completely...

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2005-04-30 03:39 PM

weird but cool =) i'm down with the whole no sleep thing as well :-S

berg

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

4 posted 2005-05-02 10:09 PM

enjoyed. especially the "lack of heart; Broken faith" part. As for the lack of sleep bit, im with you. Somehow i feel when i cant remember what i wrote the next day, it comes out more intimate than anything i could have conciously written. but thats just me

Keryn

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