Don't look back - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #7

Don't look back

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2005-04-24 04:36 AM

Won't look back
it's a long way
A fall from tact
Turn now to say

It's the end
It's the first
It's the last
It's the test

Pick up your heart,
Don't look back now
Final understanding
is yours

You found something
Something you've wanted so badly
What's wrong with you?
Just grab it,
just take it
It's your decision,
it's your choice

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-04-24 11:56 AM

"Pick up your heart,
Don't look back now
Final understanding
is yours"

I loved this part.

SwT DeViL
Junior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 26
London

2 posted 2005-06-22 05:47 PM

hey this was really good i enjoyed it very much...kepp it up
tke cre

***...$wT DeViL...***

Quad_dune
Junior Member

since 2005-06-25

Posts 26
Ontario ,Canada

3 posted 2005-06-28 02:25 PM

Nice job...

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2005-06-28 11:50 PM

wow... its like you knew what I needed to hear. like your my best friend givin me advice... thanks ... now if i can do it...

love will make you beautiful

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.