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red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04
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0 posted 2005-04-23 07:10 AM


in my eyes you're the only one for me
you and i were ment to be
your always in my thoughts,
mydream, my life, my everything.

without you who would i be?
you're my shadow, my world, my everything
without you where would i be ?

i'd give you my world just to be with you
you dont know how much i'd love you,
how i'd care for you,
or how much i'd always be there for you.

so please, open your eyes and see
how much you truly mean to me

i'd wait for you til you ever be mine
i'd wait for you til the end of time

so open your eyes and see
im really here,....................

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with you
1 posted 2005-04-23 11:08 AM


I would title it,
I'd give you my world...

this is a sweet outpouring....hope the intended reads this

Poems of Autumn
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since 2005-04-18
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2 posted 2005-04-25 09:34 AM


Wow! I agree with SEA. It feels so in depth. That title really sums it up.
WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
Iowa, US
3 posted 2005-05-03 12:19 PM


Man, I loovee this. Cant believe I missed it before. This is really good, I know the feeling too!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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