Teen Poetry #7 |
untitled- any suggestion ???????? |
red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
in my eyes you're the only one for me you and i were ment to be your always in my thoughts, mydream, my life, my everything. without you who would i be? you're my shadow, my world, my everything without you where would i be ? i'd give you my world just to be with you you dont know how much i'd love you, how i'd care for you, or how much i'd always be there for you. so please, open your eyes and see how much you truly mean to me i'd wait for you til you ever be mine i'd wait for you til the end of time so open your eyes and see im really here,.................... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I would title it, I'd give you my world... this is a sweet outpouring....hope the intended reads this |
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Poems of Autumn Junior Member
since 2005-04-18
Posts 11highschool |
Wow! I agree with SEA. It feels so in depth. That title really sums it up. |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
Man, I loovee this. Cant believe I missed it before. This is really good, I know the feeling too! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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