Secret Inside(still working on a name, for sure)

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Teen Poetry #7

Secret Inside(still working on a name, for sure)

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

0 posted 2005-04-11 07:03 AM

I definitely need help with a name guys, tell me what ya think!
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There’s a secret inside
Locked away
Your heart holds
A key to the world
If only you knew
The power inside
Of you
You can make her soul fly
Feel the wind
Beneath her feet
Let her fall
Into the arms she loves
For the world
Already fell
In love and envy
With just one look
Through your eyes

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-04-11 09:14 AM

I think I would call it,
'If only you knew'

I know this feeling, remember it well
enjoyed the read

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2005-04-11 02:10 PM

I like SEA's title suggestion. Great poem! Usually I like them longer, but I think the length on this was just right.
Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

Mysilentsaviour25
Junior Member

since 2006-04-10

Posts 12
California

3 posted 2006-04-10 04:51 PM

I like this, its creative, you seem to really capture meaning in your poems, unlike a lot of people on this site, idk. I like this......

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