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broken627
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Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2005-04-08 03:36 PM




Wake up in a haze
stuck in my self deteriorating ways
fall out of bed
onto the floor
its almost as cold as your blank stare
move out to the living room
trace the pathways of what were once your footsteps
I grab your hand
make you follow me to the door
you give me a blank look as though asking what im still here for
I move out the door
to the real world
reality doesn't seem so real to me anymore
get home late
walk through the door
fall onto the floor
crawl into bed
wake up the next morning
wishing I didn't

-*-Im not really sure what this poem is... it just kind of came out,its kind of a strange way of describing how i feel.Anyway thanks for reading:-)

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1 posted 2005-04-08 03:42 PM


it makes me wonder who is giving the blank looks at you, and why....


but you sound busy...LOL


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