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AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 60
IL,

0 posted 2004-12-21 02:22 PM


Memories falling
Dripping to the ground
I don't want them to be seen
Nor make a sound

But you see they fall
I cannot help but cry
I try to give my all
But no one gives me a try

As each memory falls
They land deeper in my heart
The more I think about them
The more I fall apart

The understatements and questions
Leave me melting away
I just wish I could wake up
To a better day

Was the forever taken from me?
Do i still have a chance
To stay at this party
and Have a last dance

The memories fall
I just don't understand
Because they are only tears
That end up in my hands

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

© Copyright 2004 JaMiE - All Rights Reserved
WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
Iowa, US
1 posted 2004-12-21 08:51 PM


OMG! I can't believe this hasn't gotten any replies! This is soooooo good! Wow, it just blows me away, this is THE BEST! Keep writing, PLEASE!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

dodge_chick2003
Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
2 posted 2005-04-03 03:12 AM


I absoutly love this poem. How in the hell did it only get one now two replies. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

*~A million words wouldnt bring you back I know because I've tried, neither will a million tears I know because I've cried~*

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.
3 posted 2005-04-03 04:50 PM



I love the whole idea of this poem. Molding the idea of memories into words. Awesome job, keep writing.

-Kelly

You play the song I know.
You are the song I know.

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
Posts 154
work
4 posted 2005-04-07 10:48 AM


"The memories fall
I just don't understand
Because they are only tears
That end up in my hands'

This was soooo good... I really liked the poem.. i am putting it in my library...

Jezz

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