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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
Memories falling Dripping to the ground I don't want them to be seen Nor make a sound But you see they fall I cannot help but cry I try to give my all But no one gives me a try As each memory falls They land deeper in my heart The more I think about them The more I fall apart The understatements and questions Leave me melting away I just wish I could wake up To a better day Was the forever taken from me? Do i still have a chance To stay at this party and Have a last dance The memories fall I just don't understand Because they are only tears That end up in my hands Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
OMG! I can't believe this hasn't gotten any replies! This is soooooo good! Wow, it just blows me away, this is THE BEST! Keep writing, PLEASE! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
I absoutly love this poem. How in the hell did it only get one now two replies. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 *~A million words wouldnt bring you back I know because I've tried, neither will a million tears I know because I've cried~* |
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electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
I love the whole idea of this poem. Molding the idea of memories into words. Awesome job, keep writing. -Kelly You play the song I know. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"The memories fall I just don't understand Because they are only tears That end up in my hands' This was soooo good... I really liked the poem.. i am putting it in my library...  Jezz |
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