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Strider612
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 46
Alabama, United States of America

0 posted 2005-01-08 11:52 AM



I know sometimes the world appears so cold and gray outside
And sometimes we all need a place to hide
The future looks so bleak to us we wonder what’s the use
And if it even helps to know we tried.
When the evening comes upon you, just look and find my love,
I’ll be your ever-faithful, tender guide.

Because as long as I am living, you don’t have to be alone
I’ll let you rest here on me if you need a friend to care
Just give me all your troubles; you can hide here in my arms
I’ll take away the heartaches that you’ve known
No, you won’t be alone.

Maybe in the past you didn’t want to trust your friends,
You didn’t know if they could help at all.
It seems a little rough at times to make it through the night,
But from now on I’ll be right there when the darkness falls.
When the twilight comes in closer, just look and find my love,
I’m always within reach of your heart’s call.

As long as I am here, then you don’t have to be alone.
I’ll guard your soul as loyally as anyone could dare
Place on me your sorrows, it’s the task I live to do
I’ll keep you safe here with me ‘til night’s flown.
No, you won’t be alone.

Someday, maybe, I might need some help to make it through
And I hope then you’ll tell me the same things I’m telling you:

As long as I am living, you don’t have to be alone
There’s not a load too heavy for me to help you bear
Let me hear your secrets and your worries if you can
Together we can face the world’s unknown
No, you won’t be alone.

© Copyright 2005 Levi Pressnell - All Rights Reserved
peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2005-01-08 08:15 PM


Everyone needs someone. Good job! ~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2005-01-08 09:00 PM


Wow, this is so strong and beautiful. Im speechless. This had such a powerful affect on me.
Definetly going in my library.
Perfect art here. Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

Snickers123
Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
3 posted 2005-04-02 10:52 PM


that was beautiful. nice job.
Jezzika
Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154
work
4 posted 2005-04-07 10:52 AM


This was amazing.....i loved it!!

Jezz

PoeTik JusTice
Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186
California, USA
5 posted 2005-04-09 05:06 AM


Wow this was really beautiful! Awesome job.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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