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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-11-04 06:51 AM



Memories flash back
Back from a time
When you and only you
Could be found in my thoughts.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
I see you standing there,
And I just wish
Wish that I could hold you,
But you’re not mine to hold.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
I see you standing there,
And I see the things
That you always try to hide,
And I wish that I could comfort you.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
I see you standing there,
And I just wish
Wish that I could let go
Let go of this memory of you.
~*~*~*~*~*~*
I see you standing there,
And I just wish
Wish that I could hold you,
Hold you like I used to,
But you’re not mine to hold…
             Anymore....

"Cut my life into pieces, this is my last resort."~PaPaRoach

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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-04 11:43 AM


damnit man....youre right
monkey
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 27

2 posted 2003-11-16 07:37 PM


awesome poem very good!
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Beneath the northern stars
3 posted 2003-11-17 12:20 PM


It can be so hard to let go. Sometimes, however, people need a person to hang on to them.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Mysilentsaviour25
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since 2006-04-10
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California
4 posted 2006-04-10 03:59 PM


Wow, i wasn't gunnna read this but i really got into it. My boyfriend told me something very similar to this when we got back together one time. It almost made me cry just remembering that time. Thank you well written!
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