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sometimesitslonely
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since 2005-12-27
Posts 41
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0 posted 2006-04-09 01:55 PM


You've --left-- me...
and I'm dying

.w.i.t.h.o.u.t

you...

I ache for one more

(kiss)

but I don't think

you'd %mean% it...

And what is the point of that?

      -H-o-p-e-

is so, so far away,

And I feel like

                                 no one

loves me...for all I know that's...

=======true===========

This smile is fake,
These tears aren't.

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1 posted 2006-04-09 01:56 PM


Cool. Its kinda different. Cool.

                 Jessica

Merik
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since 2006-04-10
Posts 6

2 posted 2006-04-10 11:12 AM


I think it's alright im not a real critic but poems are made to show our emotions so i hope you'll find someone new to love and be wid. And just remember your not the only one in these little world. Everyone is unique so don't waste time about thinking about lonelyness just get out there and be wid your mates
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