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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-11-12 09:35 PM

Enough for Everything

The lights along the street
Illuminate our path as a walkway.
We never notice how little by littlw
The light fades as we slowly stray.
Arm in arm, hand in hand,
why should we notice the world around?
Excitment from liquid love,
In you I'll gladly drown.
Searching for new highs
From your intoxicating scent,
I snuggle closer to understand
Where my carefulness had went.
Browns captured in my eye,
Just a reflection from yours.
Beauty is not lost in my mind,
I can envision enven your lovely core.
We have found our way
To a place void of all light.
I care not though
For you are here, but not in sight.
Feeling your touch as a great comfort,
Smooth, and quickly chill giving.
How I long for that assurancenow,
That something to let me know im still living.
You're everything, everywhere,
I'm lost in you, without a care.
Search the world, to meet you there,
You're everything, everywhere.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

1 posted 2003-11-12 10:10 PM

very well written, I especially liked the last few lines

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-12 11:05 PM

hmmmm, omnipresence....me like

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2003-11-14 05:43 PM

thanks for commenting, anyone else??

now im alone, but not lonely like before

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2003-11-14 06:07 PM

yeah, me
I love the feel of this, and yep, the last few lines rock

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

5 posted 2003-11-15 08:09 PM

Very sweet.....isn't it nice how love is like that? I liked reading this, it made me smile!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

6 posted 2003-11-16 11:52 AM

thanks for commenting all, i really appreciate it!!

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Mysilentsaviour25
Junior Member

since 2006-04-10

Posts 12
California

7 posted 2006-04-10 04:08 PM

Hello, you dont know me, im very new. But, i looked on this site a lot b4 i became a member and i really like all the stuff you write. It's amazing.... i especially like this one.

Mysilentsaviour25
Junior Member

since 2006-04-10

Posts 12
California

8 posted 2006-04-10 04:09 PM

Very Nice

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