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drowningmonky Junior Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 14miami, florida |
*Now before you read this I would like to let everyone now that this came to me in a dream and I wrote it down from there. If you like figuring things out read this and solve it and you will find the meaning and the advice it gives* foxes and wolves in the waters rolling with laughter at the sacrifice they were wrong they judged the innocent the fox is sneaky the wolves are guilty the water is calm but the ocean is mad it wants its land it wants it soul back just like that it fades away without an awnser without a cause its the start of what we have dugged out. |
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poise_and_rationality Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46my mind |
hmmm  i didnt quite get this explaination???? sorry if that aint good response but i dont understad at the mo...par |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Okay, I think I know the answer, well the answer as it is to me, but I’m to scared to actually say what I think it is… Would you be willing to explain it in your words so I can see if I’m right or not? Stargal PS- Even if my idea of what this is, is wrong, i still like my idea and the poem!  @-->--- |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
This is one of those times when I wish I knew the answer. I can sit here and read in to this and come up with a thousand possibilites but nothing right now is just jumping out at me sorry. I would also like you to explain.. please.. Great poem.. it is really.. well.. indepth.. `Heather. Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
i give up what is it! |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
Is the explanation that the foxes and wolves are the people of society and that we all live our lives according to what we want to do and that we really dont care about others? Is that why it says that the foxes and wolves are guilty and laughing? |
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drowningmonky Junior Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 14miami, florida |
First i will point out some details... It only says one fox is sneaky...not all and the water is calm cause they are blaming it and it knows it is innocent the ocean is mad because it wants its soul and land back the water is part of the ocean in other words "its soul" and the land because the foxes and the wolves are abusing the water (oceans soul) after the ocean gave them land... K so the foxes and the wolves are in the water because they are getting revenge..they think the water is the cause of their problem because that one sneaky fox said so the wolves are guilty because they cover up cause they know the truth but they keep on going along with it. now water is the soul of the ocean...if u dont have water then the ocean is dry... It fades away because the foxes and wolves used it up thinking it was guilty and after they dont have it anymore they realize that they made a mistake and that they need it more than they though but its too late. that is why "its the start of what we have dugged out" because trying to get rid of what we thought was our problem ended up making what we have always feared a reality..which is basically the end. |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
I like it |
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