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All because of you
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All because of you |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I don’t need you I don’t need anyone I’m fine all by myself Why are you here? Where did you come from? I don’t need you anymore And you clearly don’t need me Get outta my life You’re history now It’s not my fault Don’t ask me why or how You made a mistake I’m givin’ you that Go away now you’re not gettin’ me back I don’t need you anymore I’m fine all by myself You made me realize what A mistake this was It’s all your fault It’s all because Of you |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I liked it but it's not my favorite by you. It was kidna repetitive but good job.. ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Wow, I really liked this! I'm not sure I agree about the repetitive thing, but each to her own, I suppose. I really liked the emotion and frankness put into this...I think i'll make a couple exes read it...lol. I really enjoyed this! Dance like nobody's watching, |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
I like this one. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Well, I’m afraid that I have to agree with it being a tad bit repetitive, not a whole lot though… and it’s not like you used the same words over and over, just the same sort of meaning, if you know what I mean? I liked the general idea of the poem though and the emotions in this, it’s not my favorite by you, but I did enjoy reading it. I can’t wait to see more from you! I love reading your work  @-->--- |
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