Its been awhile...You guys should check this out its called flying

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Its been awhile...You guys should check this out its called flying

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2005-03-17 06:40 PM

I feel like an eagle
Im flying
Through skies of gray and blue
with clouds of silver lining
also know as cloud nine and
Im flying at such great heights from the high you give me
is not in comparison to any other
but your heart is no longer mine to smother
now my brain is in an emotional blunder
what you bring to my life is something like storms of rolling thunder
frightening and spiratic
I am addict
and your my bad habit
To this i confess
So unpure and unsimple
lifes a blur
and now im left wating for the sequel

-*-Move on:Life is to valuable to get stuck-*-
-*-A good mind, A good heart, warm feelings --these are the most important things-*-

[This message has been edited by broken627 (03-17-2005 08:07 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-03-20 12:10 PM

unpure is actually...impure. and unsimple isn't a word. it has kind of a nice flow, but is rather cliche.

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