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On the Open road...
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On the Open road... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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On the open road the path is wide, Here I am. Time to say goodbye. You will be able to to remember me but so long. The path has been shaky and even blocked, but now its clear and open wide. Its not just destiny, but its meant to be. The path has lead me down the roads of selfishness and selflessness. Its led me to good and led me to bad. But its always been able to accept my changes. And here I am, and its time say goodbye. A childhood. lost in daydream, the clouds are gone. Sometimes I wonder where I went wrong, and then I know that its just the process. A word the wise... from the least wise of them all. Learn from your mistakes and follow your dreams. Its childhood I say good bye to. This teen I once knew. Is going away and becoming something new. Her own identity. I hope it's I hope I learn. I hope I can make everyone happy. |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
i like this but the only thing is how u repeated "open" and "wide" sometimes repeating works like far apart from each other but over all its a good write |
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