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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2005-03-06 06:31 PM

I'm right where you left me. Where else.
Come on you say, get real you left so long ago.
But I've been sleeping summers and dreaming winters
and I never did hibernate like the rest of the creatures.

They will like to know, how deep the water was so they can advise against your return there.
Our probable damnation.
Come on I say, get real.
I could snap your plastic smile and make it sound like cheap quick music.

Implusive, required, dominant to reality.

Just what you are, just how you are, sit, they want a photograpgh with you.
If nothing else the veins were always pretty. If nothing else.
Always fasinated, never quite engaged.

A room, a skip, a bloody lip away from the true terrors.
Yet imagination never failed to deliever me past the howling girl in the light green apron.
God knows she's always cooking something.
and when she's done she emerces herself into the kitchen wall, and slips past into the thick woods and eats the berries.

Distinguished face. A body at rest.
And the subconcious dominates.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-03-07 12:15 PM

you create some of the best imagery I've read...

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2005-03-08 06:36 AM

"But I've been sleeping summers and dreaming winters
and I never did hibernate like the rest of the creatures."

Great writing

Andrew

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2005-03-11 06:35 PM

hey,
this is one of your few poems i haven't responded to lately i think, and it's awesome. you're quicly becoming one of my all time favorite PIP writers, i especially like the line:

If nothing else the veins were always pretty. If nothing else.

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

4 posted 2005-03-17 08:44 PM

Beautiful imagery, Enjoyed

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

5 posted 2005-03-19 11:24 AM

I absolutly loved this line:

"But I've been sleeping summers and dreaming winters"

really enjoyed the imagery that you put into this, awesome job.

AIM-blueyed angel940
She's a question without answers...

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