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Plug Your Ears
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Plug Your Ears |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Plug Your Ears Jesse James' victim rides again, screaming as the day he stole her innards so many years before. we all once understood how to collapse with the left foot behind the right, it was called fainting. we are alarmed by the rythmic screaching, wheels to track track to earth. how fast would i have to run to escape this town? could the gutted train offer redemption for a lad as old as i? in the end we are all homeless and looking for a roof. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow, this is amazing writing, the second and third stanza’s stand out for me though. Outstanding work, well done. Andrew  |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you for reading. it's good to have people appreciate my writing. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this has the voice of someone much older. and very wise. a voice that speaks with deliberate understanding. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks lexy. I have been trying to write with more purpose and poise. |
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