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0 posted 2005-03-09 02:13 AM


     ... going in circles ...

                                    ... bouncing ...
                  ... from wall ...
... to wall ...

... they only get stronger ...
              ... artikulating themselves ...


            ... no escape ...

  ... from one prision to another ...

...

      ... overwhelming emotions...
                     ... Alkatraz ...

... thoughts of from the heart ...
        ... feelings of the mind ...

... there's no escaping this ...

     ... going in circles ...


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1 posted 2005-03-09 10:05 AM


Great writing Alex, I'm really starting to like this new style of writing

Andrew

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2 posted 2005-03-14 11:30 PM


weird, but cool.  when i first read your stuff i was kind of iffy, but you know what? this stuff is creative and cool. good job, good job.

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3 posted 2005-03-15 04:43 PM



I agree, this different writing style is so much more different then others. I enjoyed it!

-Kelly

You play the song I know.
You are the song I know.

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4 posted 2005-03-17 04:12 AM


Thanks guys! I really appreciate it!!! Like, seriously! :P
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