Teen Poetry #7 |
Sonic Ecstasy |
Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
Well, something a bit different from all of my other posts. This one is a vent too, but a positive one. An electric one. This was inspired by a dream I had where I was playing in front of a large crowd, on stage. *************************************************** From the moment the first note is sounded, Till the last chord slowly dies away, You're lost in the wall of sound, The sonic ecstasy of love and life, Loving life... that's the feeling you get, When the song is over. Leaving with a warmth in your heart, Burning from the adrenaline in your veins, The sweat pouring from your body, Every ounce of your being in tune. In tune with the sound of thousands of hearts Acting as percussion to the power chords, Acting as emphasis to every riff, run, lick and solo. So get out on stage, Feel the white hot light, Get lost in it, And give'em hell kid... Rebel of the sacred heart |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
this sounded like something the lead singer of Lostprophets would write. There's not too much of a point to this, but oh well. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
O_O...I loved this one by you (it was positive!) ^_^ Seriously, great job! Keep Posting and Replying! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Smoothy Member
since 2002-12-02
Posts 119The dark side of the moon |
Thanks Alli. It is rare for me to post a positive one, isn't it? Rebel of the sacred heart |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Young Brother, this is what it's truly like... You ahve spent it properly. GREAT JOB111111111 In the wooden chair |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
whoa...i'm checking this one into my library. awesome write! ~kirah~ "Stand still awhile and dream of the times when your heart felt full." ~Reina Nash~ R.I.P. 9*6*04 You'll always be remembered, I love you! |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
YES! this was awesome, i can totally relate too....that feeling is what makes rocking so...totally awesome, man! haha. awesome write, i felt this one...love your writes...keep it up, kid! ~*brezee*~ |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, this is interesting. give 'em hell kid makes me think of my chemical romance (i'm guessing you've heard of them, they're awesome) i saw 'em at a concert and sort of felt the same connection to them. lol i'm relaly tired i don't know what else to say. pretty good stuff. bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I read this probably a month ago, and am way overdue in replying. I too, thought the last line was a connection to MCR. Whether or not it is, this is still an awesome poem. And yes, you have spent it properly. -Rich "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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