Teen Poetry #7 |
you yourself have changed. |
electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
sweetie; he looked too far. (away). his restrictions never included me. never would he dare to think that i wouldn’t fit into his life someway. and somehow i think we know, this is the fight. this is the turn out. we so desperately deserve our hearts beating in a distorted tune. reflections in our mirror beckon us to play one more round. of stolen, vile kisses and flashing red lights blinking at the memories lost. blinded by the failed sight of each others own open wounds. and i was there when the downfall turned out to be a play. where romeo spoke ugly meanings and juliet fell to the ground. in a heap of whispered promises and no, you don’t know how long i have been planning my funeral of crushed roses. for this one moment, everything has turned west, when i was originally walking north. for in this one moment, you are on the other side of the world, walking away in your own direction. so calm and so reposed. the beauty speaks in volumes only us; only us would know. i recognize you from that childhood; but that girl. no, she’s grown up. and i’m starting to think you’ve mistaken me for somebody else. |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Wow... this was amazing. I really liked it. This one is going in my library. This was awesome!! Jezzika you know he really wants me |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
once again, groovy. bergundy At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
there's always something moving, something passionate and something very real to everything you write. I am a fan. -Lex |
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